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11 April 2010 @ 06:13 pm
Imagination Maps!  
The Phantom Tollbooth is one of my favorite books. In it, Milo (the main character) goes on an adventure through a wonderful world invented by the author. To help us understand this world, the illustrator drew a wonderful map, so that we could see all of the places Milo traveled.


You also get to create a map which represents your own personal world! Please answer the following questions in complete sentences.


1. In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool
2. Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit
3. What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
 
 
 
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:40 am (UTC)
Re: home work
This is a great start, artman! My favorite part of your answer is all of the detail that you have about your world. (The Game Stop, the candy store, the McDonald's, etc.)

A few corrections:

In #1: Those are things you need on your map, for sure! However, that's not what the question was asking. I was asking what would make YOUR map cool.

In #2: Just add punctuation!

In #3: "Game Stop" is a proper noun (name of as store) and needs to be capitalized. Also, your sentence needs punctuation.
artman10artman10 on May 13th, 2010 02:48 pm (UTC)
Re: home work
1.Thing might make my map cool is Games Stop Candy Store and cool homes.

2.I wil like to vist he W shap containet with all the game stop's and candy shop's.

3.There will be Game Stop's candy store's McDonals resterants and many store's and homes with alot of people and farm's.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on May 13th, 2010 07:16 pm (UTC)
Re: home work
Nice job. :)