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11 April 2010 @ 06:13 pm
Imagination Maps!  
The Phantom Tollbooth is one of my favorite books. In it, Milo (the main character) goes on an adventure through a wonderful world invented by the author. To help us understand this world, the illustrator drew a wonderful map, so that we could see all of the places Milo traveled.


You also get to create a map which represents your own personal world! Please answer the following questions in complete sentences.


1. In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool
2. Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit
3. What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
 
 
 
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:58 am (UTC)
Re: map
Thank you, missartdiva, for doing your homework on time!! I'm so proud of you!

1. I agree that a compass and key would be cool (if you designed them well) but what would make your WORLD cool?

2. Please capitalize "i" (should be "I") and "candyland" (should be "Candyland").

3. Sounds fun! "Chick-fil-a" is a proper noun (a name) so it needs to be capitalized too!

You can fix all of these in your reply. :)
missartdiva on April 21st, 2010 11:22 pm (UTC)
Re: map
1.Three things that would make my map cool is a wonderland, compass, key.

2.A place that I would like to visit Candyland

3.There would be a Chick-Fil-A, beach, and a place for me to relax.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:44 pm (UTC)
Re: map
Thank you for taking the time to do improvements! This is certainly getting better. #3 is perfect now!

#2 needs punctuation.

#1 Please still answer what PLACES would make your world cool.