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11 April 2010 @ 06:13 pm
Imagination Maps!  
The Phantom Tollbooth is one of my favorite books. In it, Milo (the main character) goes on an adventure through a wonderful world invented by the author. To help us understand this world, the illustrator drew a wonderful map, so that we could see all of the places Milo traveled.


You also get to create a map which represents your own personal world! Please answer the following questions in complete sentences.


1. In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool
2. Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit
3. What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
 
 
 
purple_heartz on April 13th, 2010 11:14 pm (UTC)
Homework
1.Three thing that will make my map look nice is the title,compass,and the island.
2.One place on my map i will like to visit is the island near the bottom.
3.In a perfect world for me there will be freedom for all the children,nice clothes for everyone,and everyone to treat people equal and make people safe.Also there will be no voilence.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:44 am (UTC)
Re: Homework
Purple_heartz, thank you for doing your homework on time!! I'm so proud of you!!

Your answers for 2 and 3 are great. (Especially #3.) I was looking for something like that in question 1. What things do you think will make your WORLD "interesting, exciting, or just plain cool?"

Also, most of your punctuation/capitalization looks great. HOwever, you missed one "i" (should be "I") in answer #2.

(You can answer/fix in your reply.)
purple_heartz on April 14th, 2010 09:30 pm (UTC)
Re: Homework
Ok thx for the complament
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 19th, 2010 11:38 pm (UTC)
Re: Homework
That reply did not help you. In order for it to help you (and your grade), you need to fix the things I suggest in my comment to you.
purple_heartz on May 3rd, 2010 02:08 pm (UTC)
Re: Homework
1.Three thing that would make my map interresting,exciting,or just plain cool are a Wet Seal,McDonald,and Forever 21.

2.One place on my map I will like to visit is the island near the bottom.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 08:26 pm (UTC)
Re: Homework
:)