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11 April 2010 @ 06:13 pm
Imagination Maps!  
The Phantom Tollbooth is one of my favorite books. In it, Milo (the main character) goes on an adventure through a wonderful world invented by the author. To help us understand this world, the illustrator drew a wonderful map, so that we could see all of the places Milo traveled.


You also get to create a map which represents your own personal world! Please answer the following questions in complete sentences.


1. In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool
2. Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit
3. What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
 
 
 
hotpink_101 on April 21st, 2010 12:13 am (UTC)
RE:HOMEWORK
1. The compose rose,the dogs,and the trees,plants.
2.The map I got is not true there is no dog land but,I would like to visit every where on my map.
3.The would be there in my world/dog world.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:31 am (UTC)
Re: HOMEWORK
You must really love dogs. :) What kind of trees and plants do you have on your map? What other kinds of islands would there be?
Re: HOMEWORK - hotpink_101 on April 23rd, 2010 09:37 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: HOMEWORK - crimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:42 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: HOMEWORK - crimsonarteach on April 27th, 2010 07:12 pm (UTC) (Expand)
purple_chick17 on April 21st, 2010 12:17 am (UTC)
Hw
1.Three things i think would make my world interesting are food shaped continents,amusment parks,and the coolest compass rose in the universe.
2.The place i would like to visit in my map is happy land.
3.The things that would be in my perfect world are food places,houses,lakes,and a river of fruit punch.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:53 pm (UTC)
Re: Hw
Your map sounds fun and delicious!

Your sentences in general look great. Don't forget to capitalize "i"--should be "I"--every time you write it, though.
Re: Hw - purple_chick17 on May 3rd, 2010 05:05 pm (UTC) (Expand)
artisticgirl16artisticgirl16 on April 21st, 2010 12:24 am (UTC)
homework
1.Dear chrimsonarteach i think having lots of fun games and unique things makes the map interesting.
2.I would like to visit three places on my map the climate chang island, the game world, and the raining food world.3.In my perfect world there would be games food stores and lots of other things kids like.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:50 pm (UTC)
Re: homework
Hello, artisticgirl. :)

1. I think fun games sound great! Do you have 2 other cool things you can tell me about for answer 1? (Also, please capitalize "i"--should be "I".)

2. The three places on your map sound awesome! Just remember, names of places have capital letters at the beginning! (Proper nouns!)

3. That sounds super fun! I would like games and food stores too!
Re: homework - artisticgirl16 on May 3rd, 2010 05:27 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: homework - crimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 08:52 pm (UTC) (Expand)
artychick11 on April 21st, 2010 12:25 am (UTC)
1. a hot land so hot nobody could live there,the biggest water slide from one state to another,and the largest shopping mall that it covers half of the largest contient
2.the largest shopping mall
3.every thing cool you could name
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 01:36 am (UTC)
Those are such wonderful answers!!I love your descriptions. What a great land you are creating!!

To receive full credit on this homework, please capitalize the first letter of each of your sentences and punctuate each of them as well. I know you are a smart girl, so writing complete sentences should be no problem!
(no subject) - artychick11 on April 27th, 2010 10:54 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on April 27th, 2010 07:19 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - artychick11 on May 3rd, 2010 12:49 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 07:51 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - artychick11 on May 5th, 2010 11:36 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 10th, 2010 07:03 pm (UTC) (Expand)
pretty_boy12 on April 21st, 2010 12:34 am (UTC)
1.arcades
2.carnival rides
3.taco bell

2.6 flags

3.tacos and malls
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 01:41 am (UTC)
Thank you for doing your homework, pretty_boy!!

You do need to make these into complete sentences. I love the ideas you have and I love that you list specific details on your map!! That's fabulous. Please put them into sentence form.
(no subject) - pretty_boy12 on May 3rd, 2010 12:41 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 07:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
toadette_6 on April 21st, 2010 12:37 am (UTC)
homework
In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool?
my map is intersting because there are many contients.
Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit?
i would like to visit all of the contients.
What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
there would be no crimes.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 01:40 am (UTC)
Re: homework
Thank you for doing your homework, toadette. However, I'm looking for a lot more detail here!! Please tell me three specific things that would make your own map interesting. It would also be good for you to capitalize each of your sentences.
Re: homework - toadette_6 on April 26th, 2010 09:24 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: homework - crimsonarteach on April 27th, 2010 07:15 pm (UTC) (Expand)
princessjazmanprincessjazman on April 21st, 2010 07:38 pm (UTC)

1. My map mostly has food it really looks good everytime I look at it it makes me hungery.
2. yes there's a lot of places I would want to go in my map
3. food would make it my perfect place like chocolate,chips,and others
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:47 pm (UTC)
Yum... yours is the delicious map!

#1: You do a great job of putting this into sentence form, princessjazman! Please name 3 specific foods that would be in this world, though.

#2: Where did the sentence form go? Also, you don't really answer the question. I'm looking for examples!

#3: Please create this into a complete sentence by adding punctuation and capitalization.
maps - princessjazman on May 3rd, 2010 05:41 pm (UTC) (Expand)
purplechikk12 on April 21st, 2010 08:50 pm (UTC)
1. six flags, rita's, & towson mall.
2. towson mal and rita's.
3. malls, such as aeropostale,gucci,coach,louis vuittion and plenty more.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:35 am (UTC)
What I love about your answer is all of your detail, purplechikk!! You have such a great idea of what you want in your world!

What you need to improve is capitalizing proper nouns. The beginning of each sentence should be capitalized, as well as the name of every store. (These are all proper nouns.)
(no subject) - purplechikk12 on May 13th, 2010 02:24 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 13th, 2010 07:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
waluigi21waluigi21 on April 21st, 2010 10:39 pm (UTC)
My map
1.I like my cookie factorie,my bank,and my gold.
2.I would like to visit my cookie factorie.
3.There would be an Amusement park,Lake Rivera,and a restuarant named "Niecy's Cafe."
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:33 am (UTC)
Re: My map
I love your answers, waluigi!! Great job!
Re: My map - waluigi21 on April 22nd, 2010 11:47 am (UTC) (Expand)
Re: My map - crimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)
luigi5 on April 22nd, 2010 10:22 am (UTC)
1.banks,football felids, family stores.

2.las vages.

3.water,banks,stores.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:39 pm (UTC)
This is a good set of answers, luigi5. However, please remember to capitalize the right things!

All of these should be complete sentences. This means capitalizing the first letter of each sentence, but you also need more information for some of these to become sentences. (Right now you only have lists.)
(no subject) - man_mario12 on April 30th, 2010 11:51 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 12th, 2010 07:10 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - luigi5 on April 28th, 2010 10:36 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on April 29th, 2010 11:47 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - luigi5 on May 3rd, 2010 01:59 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:37 pm (UTC)
That sounds really fun, yoshichamp! I think Videogame land and Computer land are the places I would choose to hang out in!
yoshi15 on April 22nd, 2010 10:53 am (UTC)
1. One thing in my world interesting is that I have an Mountain that spells knoweldge.Sea that says knoweldge.A key that looks like a school.
2. Crismonartteach.
3. All of my friends, and a pool.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:35 pm (UTC)
I'm on your map? Really? Cool.

You have some really amazing things on your map, yoshi15, and you describe them well. You also do a great job remembering capitalization and punctuation. One area to improve is to make each answer into a complete sentence. For example, "Crimsonarteach" is not a sentence, which is why I need more information.
(no subject) - yoshi15 on May 3rd, 2010 12:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 08:14 pm (UTC) (Expand)
cosmicmario44 on April 22nd, 2010 10:57 am (UTC)
Things that would make my world look nice is the compass,and the different places. and since mine is so cool you cant forget world peace.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:33 pm (UTC)
Can you please number your answers? That way I know which questions you are trying to answer.

In artblog answers, I look for lots of details. In your world, you mention "the different places" but you never tell me about them! What are at least three different places that are "so cool"? I want to know!
mari064 on April 23rd, 2010 12:46 pm (UTC)
1.the three things i think would make it interisting is my compass,pitures,and symbols
2.no. there isnt
3.none.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 27th, 2010 07:09 pm (UTC)
I would like you to please:

1. Make each of these into complete sentences. (This includes punctuation and capialization.)

2. Please take the time to answer each of these questions more carefully. I can't give you credit for "no there isnt" and "none".
lilartgirl12 on May 3rd, 2010 01:37 am (UTC)
RE:Homework
1. I would have a park for dogs, shopping stores, and love.
2. I would like to visit the shopping stores.
3. The things in my world that are perfect to me are my family and friends!
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on May 10th, 2010 06:48 pm (UTC)
Re: Homework
This is a wonderful answer, lilartgirl! Great job!