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11 April 2010 @ 06:13 pm
Imagination Maps!  
The Phantom Tollbooth is one of my favorite books. In it, Milo (the main character) goes on an adventure through a wonderful world invented by the author. To help us understand this world, the illustrator drew a wonderful map, so that we could see all of the places Milo traveled.


You also get to create a map which represents your own personal world! Please answer the following questions in complete sentences.


1. In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool
2. Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit
3. What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
 
 
 
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crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:37 pm (UTC)
That sounds really fun, yoshichamp! I think Videogame land and Computer land are the places I would choose to hang out in!
yoshi15 on April 22nd, 2010 10:53 am (UTC)
1. One thing in my world interesting is that I have an Mountain that spells knoweldge.Sea that says knoweldge.A key that looks like a school.
2. Crismonartteach.
3. All of my friends, and a pool.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:35 pm (UTC)
I'm on your map? Really? Cool.

You have some really amazing things on your map, yoshi15, and you describe them well. You also do a great job remembering capitalization and punctuation. One area to improve is to make each answer into a complete sentence. For example, "Crimsonarteach" is not a sentence, which is why I need more information.
yoshi15 on May 3rd, 2010 12:54 pm (UTC)
2. I would like to go to Crismonarteach
3. In my perfect world I want all of my friends, and a pool.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 08:14 pm (UTC)
Don't forget a period after "crimsonarteach".
cosmicmario44 on April 22nd, 2010 10:57 am (UTC)
Things that would make my world look nice is the compass,and the different places. and since mine is so cool you cant forget world peace.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:33 pm (UTC)
Can you please number your answers? That way I know which questions you are trying to answer.

In artblog answers, I look for lots of details. In your world, you mention "the different places" but you never tell me about them! What are at least three different places that are "so cool"? I want to know!
mari064 on April 23rd, 2010 12:46 pm (UTC)
1.the three things i think would make it interisting is my compass,pitures,and symbols
2.no. there isnt
3.none.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 27th, 2010 07:09 pm (UTC)
I would like you to please:

1. Make each of these into complete sentences. (This includes punctuation and capialization.)

2. Please take the time to answer each of these questions more carefully. I can't give you credit for "no there isnt" and "none".
lilartgirl12 on May 3rd, 2010 01:37 am (UTC)
RE:Homework
1. I would have a park for dogs, shopping stores, and love.
2. I would like to visit the shopping stores.
3. The things in my world that are perfect to me are my family and friends!
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on May 10th, 2010 06:48 pm (UTC)
Re: Homework
This is a wonderful answer, lilartgirl! Great job!
yoshi_08yoshi_08 on May 3rd, 2010 05:39 pm (UTC)
1. My world interesting will be a ski place ,a place like 6 Flags,and a place like New York.
2.The ski place agian I will like to vist
3. The same as number 1!
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 09:00 pm (UTC)
Your interesting places sound pretty fun. I like the diversity. Have you ever been skiing?