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11 April 2010 @ 06:13 pm
Imagination Maps!  
The Phantom Tollbooth is one of my favorite books. In it, Milo (the main character) goes on an adventure through a wonderful world invented by the author. To help us understand this world, the illustrator drew a wonderful map, so that we could see all of the places Milo traveled.


You also get to create a map which represents your own personal world! Please answer the following questions in complete sentences.


1. In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool
2. Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit
3. What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
 
 
 
iluvart57iluvart57 on April 12th, 2010 08:49 pm (UTC)
homework

1.If i add fun stuff.
2. i whould like to go to stacey's world because i created it and it is for my enjoyment
3.a nice pool


crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:52 am (UTC)
Re: homework
You are the first one to do your homework! Thank you so much for doing your homework on time!!

This is a good start, but I'm looking for more specific answers here. What kind of "fun stuff" could you add? (Be specific!)

What is in "Stacey's world"? (AB name rule here?)

I'd love to have a nice pool too! Don't forget to capitalize and punctuate each sentence!! Fix these in your reply.
Re: homework - iluvart57 on April 19th, 2010 11:02 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: homework - crimsonarteach on April 19th, 2010 11:45 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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Re: homework - crimsonarteach on May 10th, 2010 06:50 pm (UTC) (Expand)
princessblu on April 13th, 2010 12:30 am (UTC)
the phantom tollbooth
1.The three things I think would make my map interesting,exciting, or just plain cool is the colors, border, and the neatness.

2.The peace sign is th part in map I would like to visit.

3.The would be lautner and bieber world in my perfect world.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:50 am (UTC)
Re: the phantom tollbooth
Princessblu, thank you so much for doing your homework on time! I'm so proud of you!!

I agree that those things will make your map better. However, I was asking questions about the world itself. What would make your world cool?

Why would you visit the peace sign?

Are "lautner" and "bieber" people? (If so, they should be capitalized.)
Re: the phantom tollbooth - princessblu on April 15th, 2010 09:06 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Almost perfect - crimsonarteach on April 19th, 2010 11:27 pm (UTC) (Expand)
purple_heartz on April 13th, 2010 11:14 pm (UTC)
Homework
1.Three thing that will make my map look nice is the title,compass,and the island.
2.One place on my map i will like to visit is the island near the bottom.
3.In a perfect world for me there will be freedom for all the children,nice clothes for everyone,and everyone to treat people equal and make people safe.Also there will be no voilence.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:44 am (UTC)
Re: Homework
Purple_heartz, thank you for doing your homework on time!! I'm so proud of you!!

Your answers for 2 and 3 are great. (Especially #3.) I was looking for something like that in question 1. What things do you think will make your WORLD "interesting, exciting, or just plain cool?"

Also, most of your punctuation/capitalization looks great. HOwever, you missed one "i" (should be "I") in answer #2.

(You can answer/fix in your reply.)
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artprincess21artprincess21 on April 13th, 2010 11:16 pm (UTC)
Map Homework
1. In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool?
The 3 things I have in my map are amusement parks and I also have cool resturants and I have a huge jungle.
2. Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit?
Yes. The place I want to visit is the Land of Discovery on my map because I want to explore The Great Jungle I have there.
3. What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
The things or places that would be in my world are cool cafes, a huge shopping mall,The Great Jungle, and the Land of Animals.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:54 am (UTC)
Wow!!!
What a great answer, artprincess!!! This is exactly the kind of answer I was looking for! Your map sounds really fun and exciting too. :D
Re: Wow!!! - artprincess21 on April 20th, 2010 12:26 am (UTC) (Expand)
Re: Wow!!! - crimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:56 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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missartdiva on April 13th, 2010 11:18 pm (UTC)
map
1.Three things that would make my map cool is a wonderland, compass, key.
2.A place that i would like to visit candyland.
3.There would be a chick-fil-a, beach, and a place for me to relax.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:58 am (UTC)
Re: map
Thank you, missartdiva, for doing your homework on time!! I'm so proud of you!

1. I agree that a compass and key would be cool (if you designed them well) but what would make your WORLD cool?

2. Please capitalize "i" (should be "I") and "candyland" (should be "Candyland").

3. Sounds fun! "Chick-fil-a" is a proper noun (a name) so it needs to be capitalized too!

You can fix all of these in your reply. :)
Re: map - missartdiva on April 21st, 2010 11:22 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: map - crimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:44 pm (UTC) (Expand)
redchick17 on April 13th, 2010 11:18 pm (UTC)
1. i wold have a palace, key ,and a compass rose.
2.i wold like to visit is my palace.
3.i wold like to have a wet seal, a place for me to sleep,and a place for me to eat.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 14th, 2010 01:40 am (UTC)
Thank you, redchick, for doing your homework on time!! I'm really proud of you!

Please remember to capitalizethe first letter in every sentence. (Especially "I"!)

I like your answers for questions 2 and 3.

In question 1, I was really looking for things more like your "palace" idea. What things in your WORLD (not just the map) would you like to have?

You can fix/answer all of these in your reply.
(no subject) - redchick17 on April 14th, 2010 09:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on April 15th, 2010 07:22 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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artgirl_13artgirl_13 on April 14th, 2010 11:37 pm (UTC)
homework
1. The three things that I would make my world interesting,exciting,or just plain cool is my colors my lands and my key and my braoder.
2.No there is not any thing I can visit.
3.I would have Jamaca as a land that looks wered a little bit but i think it was easy but the boarder was a litte bit hard but I think it wasn't hard at all it was very goood for me. but I had to help the person next to me alot.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 27th, 2010 07:01 pm (UTC)
Re: homework
These were really more questions of imagination, artgirl. I want to know what places would be interesting/exciting/cool IF they existed in real life. Where COULD you visit if your map were real?

Please go back and answer each of these using your imagination and information from your map. Make sure you mention 3 speicific places that you have in your world for question 1. Everyone has a key/boarder, but what do YOU have that makes your actual world special?
Re: homework - artgirl_13 on May 3rd, 2010 02:02 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 15th, 2010 07:18 pm (UTC)
Hmm... those are good thoughts, mario2216, but how carefully did you read the questions? I was asking about your map and </b> your </b> world. (I want to know about you!)

Please please make sure to capitalize proper nouns and pronouns (like "i"--should be "I") as well as the beginning of every sentence. This could be how some homework answers were wrong before.
art - mario2216 on May 3rd, 2010 05:39 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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luigi11 on April 15th, 2010 10:22 pm (UTC)

1.Underground railroad,nile river, were the most land is
2.Nile river
3.A free taco machine and a free game machine
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 19th, 2010 11:35 pm (UTC)
Your map sounds like a fabulously fun place, luigi11! I would love to visit there! (Free tacos--yum!)

Please capitalize "Nile" in your first answer and add a period.

Make #2 into a complete sentence.

Add punctuation to #3.

Thanks!
(no subject) - luigi11 on April 22nd, 2010 10:39 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
hotartgirl5hotartgirl5 on April 17th, 2010 05:52 am (UTC)
RE:Homework
1. In my map the three things that i will have will be color, love islands,and just plain beautiful.

2. I would like to visit the romantic island if i was on a date.

3. The things that are perfect in our world is the animals because they make people feel better and our clothes god knows we need clothes
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 19th, 2010 11:30 pm (UTC)
Re: Homework
This is a great start to the homework, hotartgirl! I'll talk about your answers in reverse order:

3. This one looks perfect!

2. Another good answer. Please capitalize the "i" in your sentence. (Should be "I".)

1. The question for this one is about your world, not just the paper map. What cool things will be in your actual world? Why might I want to go there?
Re: Homework - hotartgirl5 on April 21st, 2010 12:18 am (UTC) (Expand)
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juigi on April 19th, 2010 10:54 pm (UTC)
1. I think that it would be better if i put in a better way to improve my key.
2. I would like to visit the place that is supposed to look like a ramp.
3.There would be a lot of skateboarding or a lot of friends.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 19th, 2010 11:33 pm (UTC)
I really love your answer for number 3, juigi. That's sort of what I was looking for in question 1. (What would be good in your world.)

Please look again at question 1. Capitalize your "i" (should be "I") and make sure you know what the question is asking.
artblog - juigi on April 20th, 2010 07:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:54 pm (UTC)
This is a good place to start, super_mario. To help it make more sense, please number your answers so that I know which questions you are answering. Also, please write three complete sentences, which punctuation and capitalization on each.
girlart13 on April 20th, 2010 11:03 pm (UTC)
1. three things i would pick is at list five countinet, a bolder , a key

2. the place on my map i wouid want vist is pairs they say it acool place.

3. what thing or place would be in my prefect world is that we all had magic , every body is friends, that we all would be rich, will get every thing we want that would we in my perfect world.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:42 am (UTC)
Girlart, your last answer is simply wonderful. I love how optimistic you are about your world and all of the wonderful details you shared about it! That sounds great!!

Please re-read question #1 and be sure to give what the question is actually asking for.

As for 2 and 3, please add capitalization to things like "i" (should be "I"), "Paris", and the beginning of your sentence!
artman10artman10 on April 20th, 2010 11:12 pm (UTC)
home work
1.You need the five map's you need to have the things that you have in your key on the maps and your key with your boarder.

2.I wil like to vist he W shap containet with all the game stop's and candy shop's

3.There will be game stop's candy store's McDonals resterants and many store's and homes with alot of people and farm's
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:40 am (UTC)
Re: home work
This is a great start, artman! My favorite part of your answer is all of the detail that you have about your world. (The Game Stop, the candy store, the McDonald's, etc.)

A few corrections:

In #1: Those are things you need on your map, for sure! However, that's not what the question was asking. I was asking what would make YOUR map cool.

In #2: Just add punctuation!

In #3: "Game Stop" is a proper noun (name of as store) and needs to be capitalized. Also, your sentence needs punctuation.
Re: home work - artman10 on May 13th, 2010 02:48 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: home work - crimsonarteach on May 13th, 2010 07:16 pm (UTC) (Expand)
roseart12roseart12 on April 21st, 2010 12:01 am (UTC)
I think having skateparks,Big shows,fighting clubs.
I would like to visit the fighting clubs.
Skateparks,Big shows,fighting clubs
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:43 am (UTC)
Roseart, I love how you have 3 specific answers! That shows me that you really understood the homework!!

Please go back and make each of your three answers into complete sentences. It looks like answer #3 is the only one that really needs to be fixed.
(no subject) - roseart12 on April 22nd, 2010 11:33 am (UTC) (Expand)
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hotpink_101 on April 21st, 2010 12:13 am (UTC)
RE:HOMEWORK
1. The compose rose,the dogs,and the trees,plants.
2.The map I got is not true there is no dog land but,I would like to visit every where on my map.
3.The would be there in my world/dog world.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:31 am (UTC)
Re: HOMEWORK
You must really love dogs. :) What kind of trees and plants do you have on your map? What other kinds of islands would there be?
Re: HOMEWORK - hotpink_101 on April 23rd, 2010 09:37 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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purple_chick17 on April 21st, 2010 12:17 am (UTC)
Hw
1.Three things i think would make my world interesting are food shaped continents,amusment parks,and the coolest compass rose in the universe.
2.The place i would like to visit in my map is happy land.
3.The things that would be in my perfect world are food places,houses,lakes,and a river of fruit punch.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:53 pm (UTC)
Re: Hw
Your map sounds fun and delicious!

Your sentences in general look great. Don't forget to capitalize "i"--should be "I"--every time you write it, though.
Re: Hw - purple_chick17 on May 3rd, 2010 05:05 pm (UTC) (Expand)
artisticgirl16artisticgirl16 on April 21st, 2010 12:24 am (UTC)
homework
1.Dear chrimsonarteach i think having lots of fun games and unique things makes the map interesting.
2.I would like to visit three places on my map the climate chang island, the game world, and the raining food world.3.In my perfect world there would be games food stores and lots of other things kids like.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:50 pm (UTC)
Re: homework
Hello, artisticgirl. :)

1. I think fun games sound great! Do you have 2 other cool things you can tell me about for answer 1? (Also, please capitalize "i"--should be "I".)

2. The three places on your map sound awesome! Just remember, names of places have capital letters at the beginning! (Proper nouns!)

3. That sounds super fun! I would like games and food stores too!
Re: homework - artisticgirl16 on May 3rd, 2010 05:27 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: homework - crimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 08:52 pm (UTC) (Expand)
artychick11 on April 21st, 2010 12:25 am (UTC)
1. a hot land so hot nobody could live there,the biggest water slide from one state to another,and the largest shopping mall that it covers half of the largest contient
2.the largest shopping mall
3.every thing cool you could name
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 01:36 am (UTC)
Those are such wonderful answers!!I love your descriptions. What a great land you are creating!!

To receive full credit on this homework, please capitalize the first letter of each of your sentences and punctuate each of them as well. I know you are a smart girl, so writing complete sentences should be no problem!
(no subject) - artychick11 on April 27th, 2010 10:54 am (UTC) (Expand)
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pretty_boy12 on April 21st, 2010 12:34 am (UTC)
1.arcades
2.carnival rides
3.taco bell

2.6 flags

3.tacos and malls
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 01:41 am (UTC)
Thank you for doing your homework, pretty_boy!!

You do need to make these into complete sentences. I love the ideas you have and I love that you list specific details on your map!! That's fabulous. Please put them into sentence form.
(no subject) - pretty_boy12 on May 3rd, 2010 12:41 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 3rd, 2010 07:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
toadette_6 on April 21st, 2010 12:37 am (UTC)
homework
In your map, what are three things that you think would make your world interesting, exciting, or just plain cool?
my map is intersting because there are many contients.
Is there any place in your map that YOU would like to visit?
i would like to visit all of the contients.
What things or places would there be in your perfect world?
there would be no crimes.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 01:40 am (UTC)
Re: homework
Thank you for doing your homework, toadette. However, I'm looking for a lot more detail here!! Please tell me three specific things that would make your own map interesting. It would also be good for you to capitalize each of your sentences.
Re: homework - toadette_6 on April 26th, 2010 09:24 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: homework - crimsonarteach on April 27th, 2010 07:15 pm (UTC) (Expand)
princessjazmanprincessjazman on April 21st, 2010 07:38 pm (UTC)

1. My map mostly has food it really looks good everytime I look at it it makes me hungery.
2. yes there's a lot of places I would want to go in my map
3. food would make it my perfect place like chocolate,chips,and others
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:47 pm (UTC)
Yum... yours is the delicious map!

#1: You do a great job of putting this into sentence form, princessjazman! Please name 3 specific foods that would be in this world, though.

#2: Where did the sentence form go? Also, you don't really answer the question. I'm looking for examples!

#3: Please create this into a complete sentence by adding punctuation and capitalization.
maps - princessjazman on May 3rd, 2010 05:41 pm (UTC) (Expand)
purplechikk12 on April 21st, 2010 08:50 pm (UTC)
1. six flags, rita's, & towson mall.
2. towson mal and rita's.
3. malls, such as aeropostale,gucci,coach,louis vuittion and plenty more.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:35 am (UTC)
What I love about your answer is all of your detail, purplechikk!! You have such a great idea of what you want in your world!

What you need to improve is capitalizing proper nouns. The beginning of each sentence should be capitalized, as well as the name of every store. (These are all proper nouns.)
(no subject) - purplechikk12 on May 13th, 2010 02:24 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - crimsonarteach on May 13th, 2010 07:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
waluigi21waluigi21 on April 21st, 2010 10:39 pm (UTC)
My map
1.I like my cookie factorie,my bank,and my gold.
2.I would like to visit my cookie factorie.
3.There would be an Amusement park,Lake Rivera,and a restuarant named "Niecy's Cafe."
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 22nd, 2010 02:33 am (UTC)
Re: My map
I love your answers, waluigi!! Great job!
Re: My map - waluigi21 on April 22nd, 2010 11:47 am (UTC) (Expand)
Re: My map - crimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)
luigi5 on April 22nd, 2010 10:22 am (UTC)
1.banks,football felids, family stores.

2.las vages.

3.water,banks,stores.
crimsonarteachcrimsonarteach on April 23rd, 2010 09:39 pm (UTC)
This is a good set of answers, luigi5. However, please remember to capitalize the right things!

All of these should be complete sentences. This means capitalizing the first letter of each sentence, but you also need more information for some of these to become sentences. (Right now you only have lists.)
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